Sigh..More Writing Criticism

The call came in at precisely three eleven am. It was from my ex-wife whose name I will not reveal for a number of very good reasons. Once you read this story you will understand.

‘’Alan, are you awake, I had to call you, it is of the utmost importance.’’ The truth was if I wasn’t awake before I was now. ‘’What’s the problem, are you okay? Do you need me to call an ambulance? Tell me, tell me, what’s going on.’’…